Thursday, March 8, 2012

Old People at the Wheel: Why there should be stricter rules for elderly.

          Imagine this, a person is driving down a snowy road. Suddenly a driver pulls into his or
her lane and they have to immediately put on their brakes and go into another lane just so that
they don’t get hit by the elderly driver. Then as that person is going around the driver so that they
can get away from him they find out that its an elderly person who apparently didn’t have the
time to clean off his windows. Old people cause many accidents and problems on the road which
would be reduced with more rules and regulations for elderly drivers.
            There are many factors that affect the elderly and their driving. Robert Davis and
Anthony DeBarros have found out that as people get older “Reflexes, flexibility, visual accuracy,
memory and the ability to focus all decline with age.” They also say that “Medicine that treat
various ailments also make it more difficult to focus and make snap decisions” Making it harder
for elderly people to drive (Davis, DeBarros). TAC an online resource states that some other
things that get affected by age is peoples eyes for an example people cant focus, have visual
problems, difficult to see colors, hard to detect distances, and it is also hard to see in the dark.
Other problems could also be the heart or hearing issues (Older Drivers, TAC). Older drivers
could also have other problems that affect driving like their reaction time and how medicines
can cause shaking, dizziness and can cause a driver to become drowsy. These issues are very
serious when it comes to driving, drivers would not want to be in front of a person who is has a
problem that makes it hard for them to stop the car.
In some ways you could also be hurting the elderly. Think about this by taking away
driving for elderly people its like taking away their freedom. They cant go any where; they cant
go out and do things or get things they need and its also the though because if people take away
the elderlys’ driving then it is like  taking away their privileges and they (the elderly) feel as
though they are forgotten (Lipman 64).
            In some states there are laws to better protect the other drivers from the elderly. For
instance in California they demand drivers 70 and older to redo there drivers test if they have
been in at least 2 car crashes in one year. Another case where the state has help with this problem
would be in Pennsylvania where they have stated that seniors must have a physicians report to
show that they are safe to drive (Car Insurance Rates).
            It’s not every day you hear about the elderly crashing into people or things but here are
some occasions where they have …
 -Reese Whitherspoon was hit by a 84 year old woman.
-At the age of 86 George Russell Weller hurt abut 70 and killed 10 when he drove his car into a
farmers market in Santa Monica CA (Davis, DeBarros).
In time in some way or another either now or later every driver will at some point in time
be effected by an elderly driver. Or maybe by the time you start driving if haven’t started yet
there will be stricter rules for them driving.


           




                                               
                                                            Works Cited
Davis, Robert. DeBarros, Anthony. “Older Dangerous Drivers a Growing Problem.” USA Today  
             5/2/07. USA Today. Web. 2/9/12
“Elderly Driver Licensing Laws.”  Car Insurance Rates. 2012. 2/13/12
“Elderly Driving, Seniors at the Wheel.” Motorist News+ Driving Guideline. Smart
Motorist. 2/13/12
Lipman, Larry. How Should Society Address the Needs of the Elderly?
27500 Drake Rd
Farmington Hill MI 48331-3535:        ,2005.print
“Older Drivers.” TAC Saftey. 
     www.tacsaftey.com.au/isp/content/NavigationController.do?areaID=2#top

Thursday, January 26, 2012

GRASP Assement

Sarah Noble Divorce
Divorce is a serious topic. My parent’s divorced I was only 6 years old. At that age I didn’t know much about it but as I grew up I learned more about divorce and how it affects me personally. Divorce is very important in a child’s life it can either hurt them or make them stronger. I have now learned just like you will learn from reading this the ups and downs of divorce.
http://www.divorce.com/article/divorce-affects-children
In the article “Divorce affects children” By an unknown source informs parents about the risk children could get from divorces. The websites view point is that there is risk mentally and physically as an outcome of divorce.  The websites view point is this because it states that “Children…have more health problems behavioral issues and emotional disturbances in there life time.” The articles text structure is cause and effect because it says the cause divorce on kid and the effect the mental and physical problems as an outcome. The author of this piece uses almost no conflicting evidence since this is to inform. The author of this article does have a slight bias and that is that divorce is a bad thing. I can tell this because in the article he manly states how it affects children badly and not how it could affect them in a good way. Some words the author used to show the bias are “many” “consequences”  profoundly” and “fundamental”. The article uses  ethos in the article because it helps him show his bias in the article even though it is not persuation. This is a good source because it has very little ads no spelling mistakes and it has a copy right, other sources and a good design layout plus it has a place where you can ask questions and get answers.
                                                                   
in the article “Divorce! Its good for children” By Jane Smiley is persuading people that divorce is a good thing for kids. Smileys view point is that good things can come out of a divorce. Her view point is this because in her article she says step kid and your kids get “ …friends and allies as well as play mates.” The kind of text structure she uses is cause and effect because she says the cause how divorce is at a high rate and that its effecting kids in a big way and then she says the effect, how children are being affected in a positive way. She also uses the text structure description because she describes how divorce can be good for kid and she states example to in the article of how it makes kids happy. In the article smiley does not put in any conflicting evidence because she persuades you to only look at one side and not the other. This Shows that smiley has a slant for saying that divorce is good for children. She says her slant when she says “So far be it from me to praise divorce”. Some connotation word used in this article are flexibility, imagination, vivid, and appealing. Smiley uses the persuasive strategies of ethos. This is when she says “Falling in love is an expression of freedom and so is divorce.” Showing a moral value of having freedom.  The accuracy of the source is semi good there are some adds and there are links along with a place where you can put your own opinion plus a copy right date.

This article by an unknown source persuades parents and others about how divorce is a bad thing. The authors view point is that divorce is a horrible thing that hurts children. They say this when they state “Divorce traumatizes children…”  The text structure that is in this article is description because they describe how divorce is a bad thing and how it can seriously hurts children. I know this because the article says “A child who’s parents are divorced may feel liked there sucked into a vortex of loneliness guilt and fear.” In this article the author does use conflicting evidence when she says “ Some children may become psychology scarred from the experience and others may not be affected at all.” The way she describes how divorce is bad for kids and how she uses her words says that she has the slant that divorce it bad for children. Some connotating words she uses are vortex, traumatizes, loneliness, sleeplessness, deranges, magnitude, and psychologically scarred.  In this article the author uses pathos to persuade then reader. The author uses pathos when they say “Divorce deranges the idea of order for a child. This is why broken promises- some things as small as a baseball game- take on a magnitude far beyond actual significance.” The accuracy of this of this website/ article is strong because they have very little ads some links and sources from where they got information like doctors and psychologist. Also they have a very nice setup for there article.

Monday, November 21, 2011

Summer

           
By the time I got to the house I knew I never should have come. Hi I’m Anna let me explain myself. It was the brutally hot summer of 2011 and I was going to my grandpa’s house. It all started when I decided I was going to his house for the fourth of July. The plan was to get on the plane fly over have some fun on the lake for twos days. Then my family would come down and we would stay for two days then go home but that plan toke a horrible twist. Here we go.
            “Mom I’m all packed lets go,” I yelled at my mom.
            “Ok I’m coming let me just get my camera,” She yelled back.
            “Gosh you are so slow”
            “I heard that”
            My mom then came into the room with her camera around her neck and car keys in her hands.
            “I’m ready,” She says.
            Running my mom and I jumped into the car (already late) and headed to the Chesterfield airport where my grandpa’s waiting with his plane. Two stop lights and one dead animals on the side of the road and where there. My heart was racing, my mind going threw all the different things that could go wrong, we could get lost; we could have a plane problem then fall to the ground and die! No, no more bad thoughts I told my self every thing is going to be fine. As we pulled up to the side of the plane he showed him self, my grandpa walking around the plane with a smile on his face.
             It seems like every time I meet him he changes, gets older, more mean looking. “Hey,” I yell over the roar of the engine.
                        “Hey kiddo,” He yells back.
                        My mom took the camera off from around her neck. “Ok now, now lets get some pictures then you can go,” My mom says. She already looks teary eyed (gosh why is she so emotional).
            I got up by the plane (already feeling weirded out because I never spend time with my grandpa) and we took some pictures. The air out side was boiling and I remembered that there was no air conditioning; this was going to be a very long flight.
                        “Anna, did you bring your sun glasses,” My mom asked in a almost annoyed tone.
                        “No I didn’t think I’d need them,” I said back, meaner than I intentioned.
                        “You know well be going right into the sun on are way there you’ll probably want them.,” My grandpa added.
            “Yah well to bad!,” I  said answering both of their complaints.
            “Just incase you need them you can have mine,” My mom went back to the car to get some pair of her glasses. When she came back noticed she had the ugliest mist horrible things I have ever seen in my life. They looked as if they belonged to a hippy from the 70’s. “Here you go Anna, One last hug and you’re off.”
                        “Thanks mom but I don’t need them, ill be good. I think I can handle a little sun.”
                        “But Anna your going to want them when the suns in your eyes,” She just would not quit with those stupid sun glasses.
                        “Ok fine. By mom”
And that was it. I boarded the plane and she was still there watching us. I put on the stupid glasses (that I still to this day have no clue how she can wear those thing they hurt your head like crazy) and she was still watching us. How cloud she do that! She got out her camera and started to take pictures, of me in the plane, with those ugly glasses. UGGGHHHHH was all I could think. BOOM what was that. A low rumble started to shake the plane. I was freaking out my mind was going crazy.
                        “What was that,” I asked frantically hoping we weren’t going to die.
                        “Oh that it’s just the plane, some times it has trouble starting,” My grandpa said as if  it was  a normal every day thing.
                        “Oh ok good.”
                        We were off. For some reason ever since I was a little girl I loved flying, not just in planes but in parasailing and just manly the idea of being in the air. But I have always been deathly afraid of heights (which I find ironic). The flight was only an hour long and the view was beautiful I even got to fly a little (which I learned I am not so good at. BAM another crash, this time I new it was just the tiers hitting the pavement. Unloading the plane and putting it back into its garage was a different story. 1: back half way into the garage. 2: get out and push the dang thing all the way into its spot and let me tell you that was hard work; thankfully I didn’t have to do any of it HA! 3: Go to the car and drive away and back to your home.
 When we got back to my grandparents house Bunny and Della where there waiting for us. Let me tell you those dogs are smart they can open doors and stuff its really cool, so they where outside even before I got out of the car. I grabbed my stuff and went through the threshold in to the house. In my mind I visualized a hotel lobby and a reception lady saying “door 2 on your left” the place was so big but there was no reception lady just two crazy dogs.
“Hey Anna,” My grandma said from the kitchen.
My grandpa must still be outside I thought.
“Hey Grandma,” I said running over to give her a hug.
“How was the plane ride?”
“It was really fun but I gotta go put my stuff away. Ill be back!”
I walked to the room where I was staying and started organizing my stuff. Pants here, shirts there, swimsuits in there, ect.  In the other room I heard voices but not clear enough that  I could hear what they where saying.
            I felt so alone in that house so out of place. Woooooosh, crash, plink, plink, plink, the sound off glass hitting the floor exploded through out the house. Then there was a thud and it was quiet. I ran out into the kitchen- feeling like it was all happening in slow motion- where id heard the noise my grandma was lying on the floor motion less no sign off life.
                        “Help me, someone help” I screamed ever ounce of panic in my head, my heart was pounding I knew I had to help her but how? How could I get her help? I ran out of the kitchen into the hall where I’d seen the phone. Running as fast as I could I leaped toward the phone knocking it off onto the floor. I picked it up and putt it on my ear. No tone, nothing. The line was dead. I ran out of the House into the dirt road hoping, praying someone would drive by but I knew the truth there would be no cars for days. Nobody drove this road it was a no out lit with only about 4 houses and all of them where owned by my family nobody lived there, they where empty all off them. Looking around I thought where is my grandpa’s car it was here now it’s gone. Did he leave? Did he go some where? What’s going on?
I ran back inside the house just as night was falling and I felt scared and hungry all I wanted to do was go back home. The house was horrific my grandma’s blood was all over the floor spilling from where, where, someone threw a vase at her it looked like. But who would do that?
                        “Help me,” I heard a tiny whisper from the floor where she lay.
                        “I’m trying gran I really am, hold on ok? Just hold on! Do you know who did this?”
                        My grandma froze, fear shot on her face, she was look at something behind me. She started to point vigorously at that thing.
                        “What is it gran,” I asked looking around to see.
            Black Out.
            I guess what I never told you in the beginning was that I’m not really here I’m not alive but I’m dead if that’s what you call it. When my family got to the house they found nothing we (my grandma and I) where on a remote part of the lake where we were tied to a weight ad thrown down to the bottom were the fishy’s would nibble at us. My family, still to this day as no clue what happened.  I asked my grandma why grandpa did that to us and she told me that he was getting greedy and that grandma wanted to leave with there money but he said no, so he killed her. So I guess the morel of this story is that not all family is good some can be bad. Till then I will try and get the truth out because he is still roaming free unlike me.